端午节是五月五号。端午节几乎是最重要的中国传统的节日。端午节起源于这个故事的屈原。他是大官。他试警告楚国国王有秦国。可是楚国国王不原意听屈原。屈原忧国忧民所以他跳江自杀。老百姓对他有尊重，他们对屈原想祭祀。今天老百姓吃粽子象征他的牺牲。
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- the fifth day of the fifth lunar month: 农历五月初五
- one of the most important ...：最重要的...之一
- warn the king of Chuguo about Qinguo:警告楚国国王秦国会来打楚国 （have to give details）
- listen to someone: 听someone的话
- 尊重(respect) is an adjective or a verb transitive, not a noun.
- 祭祀(offer sacrifice to) is a verb transitive, so 祭祀 + someone directly
The Dragonboat Festival is the fifth day of the fifth month. The Dragonboat Festival is almost the most important traditional Chinese holiday. The Dragonboat festival originates from the story of QuYuan. He was a high-ranking official. He tried to warn the king of Chuguo about Qinguo. But the king of Chuguo wouldn't listen to QuYuan. QuYuan was concerned about his country and his people so he jumped in the river and killed himself. Common people had respect for him and they wanted to make sacrifices to him. Today, common people eat "sticky rice balls" to symbolize QuYuan's sacrifice.
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