2009年8月27日星期四

端午节

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端午节是一个中国最重要的传统节日之一。端午节是过节农历的五月初五现今这一天人们习惯吃粽子和把米放在竹筒里然后投到河里。人们,也常常赛龙舟。人们过端午节过的因为屈原。屈原是一个大官。楚国国王不听屈原的建议。所以楚国国王还把屈原赶了出去。因为屈原忧国忧民,他投江自杀了。

corrected 1:
端午节是一个最重要的节日中国里之一。过端午节是过节农历的六月五。现今人们习惯吃粽子和米方在竹筒里然后投到河里。人们常常也赛龙舟。人们过端午节过的因为屈原。屈原是一个大官。楚国国王不听屈原的建议。所以楚国国王赶了出去。因为屈原忧国忧民,他投江自杀了。

old:
端午节是一个最重要的节日在中国。端午节过节农历的正月六月五最近老白人习惯过这个节吃粽子和秘方在竹筒里然后投到河里。人们常常也赛龙舟。人们过端午节__因为屈原。屈原是一个官。楚国国王不听屈原的建议的话格外楚国国王赶到去了。因为屈原忧国忧民,他投自杀了。

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Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important traditional holidays in China. It’s celebrated on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month. These days, people traditionally celebrate this festival by eating zongzi and throwing bamboo stuffed with rice into the river. People also often race dragon boats. People celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival because of QuYuan. QuYuan is a high-ranking official. King of ChuGuo didn’t listen to QuYuan’s advice。 Additionally King ChuGuo drove him away. Because QuYuan cared about the people and country he jumped into the river and committed suicide.

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